Kayak Dream Flight

Last night I dreamt I flew my red kayak after the sun set to familiar waters among people I don’t know to a house on the water where we made ourselves somewhat chaotically at home.  Usually in my dreams when I fly I require no conveyance other than my mind my will my astral self.  I am experimenting without commas.

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2 thoughts on “Kayak Dream Flight

  1. First it reads very fast, but after that last remark, I had to read it again and again, to find the spots, where you left, out, the commas.

  2. Normally I use as many commas as Thomas Babington Macauley structuring long sentences symbolically dense as the colored pencil and ink drawings that sprang from dreams I dreamt while living in Portland, Oregon. I’m learning to convey meaning in electronic typeface.

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